"Return Of The Lonewolf"

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"Return Of The Lonewolf"

Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Mon Sep 29, 2008 7:35 pm

[dis is ma 1st rhyminn poem-ish fingi i've eva writtn.
it mi8 nt b dat dope, but no harm tryinn sumfing new, innit?!!]




" The divine spirit of a Lonewolf, howls out, loud, the true sensation

Eyes filled with emotion, dry tears ripped under da numb temptation

Unbroken silent questions, is it adaptation? woz there an option?

Misapprehension of our lost nation, is on rotation, of its revolution

Grinding out sins through a demon kiss, 2 peal off his skin, woz it justified?

Right or wrng? Wotz fact, he neva denied, his pride neva freeze-dried

Blindfolded facts, reacted demonised, fates unchangeable, yet he defied

Fate conquered, warrior lost wars, but his spirit survived, yet 2 b crucified

Life? Givn as a gift, Soul? Now a rift, Luv? Will b shared with one wife

ONE love, ONE lyf! Lyf is armed strife, which tells lies, through fife

Cautious of a calamitous defeated spirit, stated hanging 2 foll on a knife

Here is a lil story, behind tearless eyes, which realized da facts of lyf

oll da joys been sacrificed, woshed off in darkness, been shaded

Neva stayed in illusion, woznt blind 2 c, 2 c, oll da colours got faded

He stood&stands alone, doesnt need 2 b knwn, fate takes him ahead

MC SLiCK aka The iCON's words been marked, been comprehended "





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Post  >X-PLiCT< on Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:06 pm

ABababababa.............gr8 man...heads up to ya...keep up da gud thing...u sure do got skillz.... What a Face

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Post  Đęę ςοи§ïפЃïє on Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:43 pm

wow, a masterpiece!
SLiCk bruh, u got da talent! keep 8 up!!
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Post  Grand T on Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:01 am

this poem is sooo deep!!!
i reli like it!!
~propz ta mah brada...
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Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:31 am

fankz XT, ED & GT. um glad u lads lykd it.
... thought u ppl wud find it borinn...
GT is 20 yrs, hez old enouf 2 knw wotz itz lyk 2 b alone n fi8 bak!!!
otha r still young, yet did lyk it. so um surprized. lol.
nevertheless, i appreciate fo u feedbak(s).
= )


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Post  Sharjil on Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:08 pm

aaa..bro honestly...
YOUR GIFTED Very Happy
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Post  >X-PLiCT< on Tue Sep 30, 2008 6:04 pm

Ya man.....keep it up...

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Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:52 am

Twisted Evil
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Post  >X-PLiCT< on Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:59 am

No

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Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:08 am

finally XT decided 2 spit da truth. n hez emoticon sayz, "PLZ DONN WRiTE NO MO"!!!
lol. honest comments r appreciated!!!


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Post  >X-PLiCT< on Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:33 am

Haha........u got me mayne...hey Slick...listen up can ya tell me abt a specific thread ....where to post ma lyrics up...so ya'll stars can check it out... What a Face

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Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:52 am

well... 1st fing 1st, um nt a star. um betta off as an undergrnd emcee.
n 2nd fingi, um nt diz site's Mod, so it wnt b appropriate me tellinn u where 2 post ur lyricz.
but fo da meantym, post 'em under "Poetry" thrd. ask ES abt it. olri8, kid?!?
tc


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Post  >X-PLiCT< on Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:15 am

Hey thankx man...really appreciated......... What a Face

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Post  MC SLiCK aka The iCON on Fri Oct 10, 2008 7:53 am

na worries. b kool!!!



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